miércoles, 13 de junio de 2007

Introduction to my character essay

Could friends or family influence affect anyones actions or form of thinking? This is a question I start ask my self when I read Romeo and Juliet and must of you could think I'm talking about Juliet but I am goin in another direction. During the reading of Romeo and Juliet I notice all the people that were influenced in one way or another because of the desires of others. Juliet was one of those people that were influenced by others in these case her family. But the character that make me think about the effects of the influence in a person was Tybal.Because of these I said that Tybalt's impolsiveness was provoke by his own family, impulsiveness that took him to the grave.

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Leonardo Flores dijo...

Your introduction does a great job of pulling your readers in and preparing them for the thesis. The thesis needs to be more specific, however. What kind of psychological damage are you thinking of? How would you diagnose his mental illness and how is it born from the influence of his family? Analyze carefully what he says and does to support your thesis.